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Raquel Blue the Revonnahgander by Venetia-the-Hedgehog Raquel Blue the Revonnahgander by Venetia-the-Hedgehog
:iconiloveitplz: YAY! A NEW OC!!!!! :iconinloveplz: It's my first Omniverse OC! :love:

:heart: That's Raquel "Rocky" Blue the Revonnahgander!!! :D I named her after Rocky Blue from "Skake it up" She is my favorite character from there! :giggle: :iconshakeitupplz:

:heart: Rocky is based on Rook Blonko (one of my favorite characters from the show! :la:) and they are great friends! X3 (I was thinking that they don't have to be a couple. :XD:) :iconrookblonkoplz:

I need to work on her story! :) I really love her hair and eyes! :glomp: I hope you like it! :heart:

Ben10/Rook Blonko (c) Man Of Action
Shake it up (c) Disney
Rocky/Art (c) Me
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:icongreekstyle:
First of all I really like all the patterns you used on her clothes and skin. They make your work look more realistic. I am impressed especially with that effect, since most cartoonists don't bother doing that, even the most skilled and popular.

However, what bugs me is that you don't seem to have a certain lighting source, since random parts of her body are highlighted. I suggest you find a certain light source and shade and highlight, using that source as a guide.

Also, the tools you use to create her hair is also buggind me, since they looks kinda unrealistic, and that contraticts with the other patterns. At this point I think it would be better if you could spend dome time drawing her hair flock by flock, lineless or not. I know this can be exhausting, but I believe this may help you improve youw artwork.

Conclusion:
Vision: Your picture doesn't really represent something. You just wanted to introduce your new fc.

Originality: I can't give a high score for fan characters. I am sorry for that.

Technique: I pretty much explained my reasoning.

Impact: Your picture impressed me since I looked at it in my message box!
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:iconlecockerspaniel:
LeCockerSpaniel Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
she is so cute :squee:
maybe she could be the older sister of Kari (she is [link]) :giggle:
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :D Hehe! <3

SURE THING! :la: I love Kari!
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DivineROAR Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
I still think the females have no hair but that's just me.
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I think so either, but I was just testing! XD I think it looks kinda OK. What do you think? :)
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:icondivineroar:
DivineROAR Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
Maybe try sketching out different hair styles. For me, this one isn't the right kind to go with the stripes.
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OK! ^^
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:iconviviax:
Viviax Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Awesome. :)
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:
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:iconviviax:
Viviax Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
You're welcome. :)
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:iconana-and-daniela:
Ana-and-Daniela Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
Rosana: Hi, Rocky!! We can be friends? :D
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:icontecnawinxfan4life:
TecnaWinxFan4Life Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
WOW...
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:
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:icontecnawinxfan4life:
TecnaWinxFan4Life Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No Prob
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:iconmach03trek:
mach03trek Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
VERY CUTE.:)
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :D
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:iconperidot-sama:
Peridot-Sama Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice job!
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:
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:iconana-and-daniela:
Ana-and-Daniela Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing draw!!! I think that she can be Rosana's best friend :D
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:
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:iconana-and-daniela:
Ana-and-Daniela Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
no problem sis!
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:iconaqua-the-decepticon:
Aqua-the-decepticon Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
She looks so cute <3
Ohhhh why does her hair remind me of his [link] ? XD
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:

OMG! They look alike! XD
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:iconaqua-the-decepticon:
Aqua-the-decepticon Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
np XD
Lol I wonder what would happen if they met XDD (If in Impel Down and she was a guard, he would've probably tried to make her getting away or something XDD)
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
True! XD
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:iconaqua-the-decepticon:
Aqua-the-decepticon Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Or either....
"
Buggy : *running like hell*
Raquel : You there, prisoner!
Buggy : AAAAH WHAT THE HELL?!!???! A BAKEMONO??
Raquel : ...:?
"
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ΑΗΑΗΑΗΑΗΑ! ΧD
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Aqua-the-decepticon Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
He is so funny XD [link]
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AXAXAXA!!!! What a face! :3
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AngelFox9 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You did a great job on her! I have such a hard time drawing Rook's species. It's the frigging nose! It's so awsome looking, and it makes him look so cute, but I always have trouble placing it right. So if you see any of my art with Rook in it, please mind the human nose. mabey I can come up with a story that involves Rook becoming more human.
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:
I had the same problem! XD I would love to see a pic of him from you! :la:
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:iconangelfox9:
AngelFox9 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think I have the placing down. I'll try my best to draw him with his original nose.
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sweet! ^^
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:iconangelfox9:
AngelFox9 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! <^-\)>
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
NP! :3
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:iconangelfox9:
AngelFox9 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmoesmileplz:
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
CUTE! :3
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:iconsweetdream87:
SweetDream87 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
see. two of the same type of alien don;t have to fall in love. :meow:
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yep! <3
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:iconvenetiarocks:
venetiarocks Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, that's cool! :D
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:
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:iconslycooper11:
slycooper11 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That is so cool!
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:
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:iconslycooper11:
slycooper11 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Np!:D
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:iconstormrider19:
Stormrider19 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok you did an awesome job with this drawing, i'm definetly drawing a Revonnahgander in my next drawing list
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:

SWEET! 8D
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:iconstormrider19:
Stormrider19 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah
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:iconenerdyte:
Enerdyte Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Omg she is sooooo cute!!!! :iconawwwplz:
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Τhanks! :love:
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:iconenerdyte:
Enerdyte Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
you're welcome! :D
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GreekStyle Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Καλή δουλειά Βενετία! Και έχεις δίκιο, δεν είναι ανάγκη να είναι κάτι παραπάνω από φίλοι. Ήδη υπάρχουν πολλοί χαρκατήρες γι αυτό XD
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