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Raquel Blue the Revonnahgander

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:iconiloveitplz: YAY! A NEW OC!!!!! :iconinloveplz: It's my first Omniverse OC! :love:

:heart: That's Raquel "Rocky" Blue the Revonnahgander!!! :D I named her after Rocky Blue from "Skake it up" She is my favorite character from there! :giggle: :iconshakeitupplz:

:heart: Rocky is based on Rook Blonko (one of my favorite characters from the show! :la:) and they are great friends! X3 (I was thinking that they don't have to be a couple. :XD:) :iconrookblonkoplz:

I need to work on her story! :) I really love her hair and eyes! :glomp: I hope you like it! :heart:

Ben10/Rook Blonko (c) Man Of Action
Shake it up (c) Disney
Rocky/Art (c) Me
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First of all I really like all the patterns you used on her clothes and skin. They make your work look more realistic. I am impressed especially with that effect, since most cartoonists don't bother doing that, even the most skilled and popular.

However, what bugs me is that you don't seem to have a certain lighting source, since random parts of her body are highlighted. I suggest you find a certain light source and shade and highlight, using that source as a guide.

Also, the tools you use to create her hair is also buggind me, since they looks kinda unrealistic, and that contraticts with the other patterns. At this point I think it would be better if you could spend dome time drawing her hair flock by flock, lineless or not. I know this can be exhausting, but I believe this may help you improve youw artwork.

Conclusion:
Vision: Your picture doesn't really represent something. You just wanted to introduce your new fc.

Originality: I can't give a high score for fan characters. I am sorry for that.

Technique: I pretty much explained my reasoning.

Impact: Your picture impressed me since I looked at it in my message box!